tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post905633650780856886..comments2023-06-17T06:42:27.316-07:00Comments on snow like thought: Words worthRachel Fentonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-71022267652374818082012-02-10T13:55:55.061-08:002012-02-10T13:55:55.061-08:00Hahaha! Blame the gadget, not the messenger! Besid...Hahaha! Blame the gadget, not the messenger! Besides, post vacation relaxed prose is forgivable!Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-50244962633806165892012-02-10T06:38:25.374-08:002012-02-10T06:38:25.374-08:00Apparently my writing is flabby. Now I'm upset...Apparently my writing is flabby. Now I'm upset with you! It's all your fault.<br /><br />:)Lorihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708851895104018255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-7818687169311714022011-12-01T11:49:53.933-08:002011-12-01T11:49:53.933-08:00No worries for the links - glad to have bumbled ac...No worries for the links - glad to have bumbled across it! It's provided much distraction so far!<br /><br />Thank you - I do love getting awardy things - and thanks so much for thinking of EB - that's champion! x Will be over anon to collect and give my Taylor Swift speech, or is it Kate Winslet....?Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-3699707416839302142011-12-01T09:46:37.666-08:002011-12-01T09:46:37.666-08:00Brilliant! And addictive. "I'll just try ...Brilliant! And addictive. "I'll just try this one..." etc. Thanks for the link to this.<br /><br />Over on my blog I've just linked to 'Escape Behaviours' as part of one of those award-thingies that do the rounds every so often. I'm sure you'll have had LOADS of these in the past so only reciprocate if you want to. I just wanted to link to your awesome creation.Teresa Stensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17027879292470220383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-68977578590776983792011-11-29T12:21:40.586-08:002011-11-29T12:21:40.586-08:00Kass! x
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Your wordy is not the kind...Kass! x<br />:)<br />Missed you!<br /><br />Your wordy is not the kind of wordy to be feared.Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-69628525073178168392011-11-29T10:58:19.888-08:002011-11-29T10:58:19.888-08:00I'm afraid to take the test. I know I'm to...I'm afraid to take the test. I know I'm too wordy.Kasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233330248952156754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-61855259093847203262011-11-26T20:28:25.063-08:002011-11-26T20:28:25.063-08:00Hahaha. Margery would have no doubt embraced this ...Hahaha. Margery would have no doubt embraced this technology, thoug I doubt it would have altered her style much. <br /><br />It's quite addictive. <br /><br />Joyce is possibly anorexic by the BMI of this gadget, however - give the man a sentence expander - build him up some!<br /><br />You could make a chart for different authors - an excerpt slim club; see who comes out the trimmest....that's probably fattist though....Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-50945202634366797172011-11-26T20:16:54.874-08:002011-11-26T20:16:54.874-08:00Margery has discovered she needs toning - or could...Margery has discovered she needs toning - or could she make do with her corset? <br /><br />Seriously, a great resource, isn't it? Managed fit and trim. It made me think about verb-use.<br /><br />I tried pasting some James Joyce into it. He came out lean on all counts. It would be interesting to subject other authors to the treatment.Dominic Rivronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02618013365521035400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-54244557994797551672011-11-20T13:11:25.089-08:002011-11-20T13:11:25.089-08:00No worries, Sandra! That's very cool that your...No worries, Sandra! That's very cool that your writing is getting leaner as you go. Glad you liked the link.Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-92035087551502315802011-11-20T01:55:06.558-08:002011-11-20T01:55:06.558-08:00Fascinating, especially to see that my fiction is ...Fascinating, especially to see that my fiction is a lot leaner than the MA dissertation I did three years ago - tells me my writing has improved through practise. Although I was not entirely lean, I attribute that to the fact that there was dialogue in the fiction submitted. Thanks for the link.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-64969199415824909012011-11-16T12:46:30.919-08:002011-11-16T12:46:30.919-08:00Culling's a good sign of a skilled self-editor...Culling's a good sign of a skilled self-editor, I think, Nuala - means gadgets like this can be just for fun!Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-15214573908093667072011-11-16T12:41:30.590-08:002011-11-16T12:41:30.590-08:00Give it a go, Helen, though I think your words are...Give it a go, Helen, though I think your words are lean enough - really enjoying your current blog posts!Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-88498006016812350502011-11-16T03:00:39.637-08:002011-11-16T03:00:39.637-08:00Ha ha, that's so coll. I am lean too. Not very...Ha ha, that's so coll. I am lean too. Not very surprising as I tend to cull words rather than add them :)Group 8https://www.blogger.com/profile/07924947352624027079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-16459031533163847532011-11-15T15:44:26.593-08:002011-11-15T15:44:26.593-08:00A lean writing machine? That's great! I think ...A lean writing machine? That's great! I think my writing could use a bit of trimming back now and again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-90216358980565298512011-11-15T14:01:18.916-08:002011-11-15T14:01:18.916-08:00Isn't just, Dave!?Isn't just, Dave!?Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-52286022344197401862011-11-15T10:33:44.353-08:002011-11-15T10:33:44.353-08:00Fascinating stuff.Fascinating stuff.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-19982544161993584912011-11-13T11:38:36.073-08:002011-11-13T11:38:36.073-08:00Sara - thanks for sharing - I'm not on twitter...Sara - thanks for sharing - I'm not on twitter as yet. No worries witht the credits - I got it off facebook!Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-44249395842837415012011-11-13T11:36:58.506-08:002011-11-13T11:36:58.506-08:00Talei - there's room for all sorts in the libr...Talei - there's room for all sorts in the library :)Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-84914989377259444872011-11-13T07:20:08.629-08:002011-11-13T07:20:08.629-08:00I shared the link on twitter but couldn't see ...I shared the link on twitter but couldn't see you on there to credit with pointing me in its direction. Are you on twitter?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00597852661913928616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-50088975781461938152011-11-13T04:44:19.773-08:002011-11-13T04:44:19.773-08:00Impressive, I suspect my writing is not so lean......Impressive, I suspect my writing is not so lean... ;-) Happy Sunday!Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-56396396211361616772011-11-13T01:35:37.722-08:002011-11-13T01:35:37.722-08:00All the fun of Wordle but more useful! :)All the fun of Wordle but more useful! :)Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573472801176728225.post-9794445730813444062011-11-13T01:24:32.055-08:002011-11-13T01:24:32.055-08:00Ooh, that's rather nifty. Thanks for sharing t...Ooh, that's rather nifty. Thanks for sharing the tip :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00597852661913928616noreply@blogger.com