Sunday, October 30, 2011

To risk

My poem "Tourists" is up at Camel Saloon. Please feel free to amble on over - would love to know your thoughts on this one.

Many thanks to Russell Streur.

10 comments:

Titus said...

Impressive: very.

Loved the way you played with both time and the reader. Shifty, shifting work. Really liked it.

Rachel Fenton said...

Thank you, JoAnne :)

helencaldwell said...

And I loved the way you played with the readers expectations. At first it seemed and happy and light, then dark and sad and lonely, then ended on a note of hope. Shifty, shifting work is right. I also really liked it.

Rachel Fenton said...

Cool! Thanks, Helen.

Vanessa Gebbie said...

And me - enjoyed the smooth flow of the words and images - emotions unreeling. Thanks!

Rachel Fenton said...

Thank you, Vanessa!

The Divorced Lady's Companion to Living in Italy said...

Wow Rachel! But I left my comment on the other site. I really felt this poem travelling through me, a good feeling. Ciao cat

Rachel Fenton said...

Thanks for such a close reading - very happy you read it and got so much back from it, Cat.

joehebden said...

Lovely work, Rachel

Rachel Fenton said...

Thank you, Joe :)