Impressive: very. Loved the way you played with both time and the reader. Shifty, shifting work. Really liked it.
Thank you, JoAnne :)
And I loved the way you played with the readers expectations. At first it seemed and happy and light, then dark and sad and lonely, then ended on a note of hope. Shifty, shifting work is right. I also really liked it.
Cool! Thanks, Helen.
And me - enjoyed the smooth flow of the words and images - emotions unreeling. Thanks!
Wow Rachel! But I left my comment on the other site. I really felt this poem travelling through me, a good feeling. Ciao cat
Thanks for such a close reading - very happy you read it and got so much back from it, Cat.
Lovely work, Rachel
Thank you, Joe :)
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Impressive: very.
Loved the way you played with both time and the reader. Shifty, shifting work. Really liked it.
Thank you, JoAnne :)
And I loved the way you played with the readers expectations. At first it seemed and happy and light, then dark and sad and lonely, then ended on a note of hope. Shifty, shifting work is right. I also really liked it.
Cool! Thanks, Helen.
And me - enjoyed the smooth flow of the words and images - emotions unreeling. Thanks!
Wow Rachel! But I left my comment on the other site. I really felt this poem travelling through me, a good feeling. Ciao cat
Thanks for such a close reading - very happy you read it and got so much back from it, Cat.
Lovely work, Rachel
Thank you, Joe :)
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